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That opening couplet is a fine, fine thing. Hope Violet recovered quickly from her conk. (Or that the conk was purely fictional.) -- The spirals in her eyes make it look like she's going down for the count.
Posted by: The Modesto Kid | April 24, 2009 at 10:37 PM
"Til its fabric is a thread" scans better than "until"...
Posted by: ajay | April 24, 2009 at 11:58 PM
I disagree -- if you read "Til its fabric is a thread/ Stretched where you could be instead", you need to pause for a beat after "thread" -- with "Until" there is no such need.
Posted by: The Modesto Kid | April 25, 2009 at 12:58 AM
thanks, modesto. I'm amazed at how well she's picked up various conventions. Spiral eyes for a conk and so forth.
Posted by: jholbo | April 26, 2009 at 09:56 PM